What’s Your Sign?
We pledged solemn vows,
With promises of fidelity, devotion, and love.
But now those words ring hollow.
I feel as though the world has stopped turning.
And it causes me to wonder . . .
Do you still love me?
Please, give me a sign.
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I don’t know what the prompt is, but I like the piece.
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Thank you so much for your kind words; I appreciate it. And the prompt was “What’s your sign?” Thanks for stopping by and have a wonderful day!
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lol. I guess I could have guess that prompt. brain dead this friday. have a great one as well
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I like your take on the prompt! Welcome to the Gargleblaster. Nicely done.
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Thank you so much for your kind words and for the warm welcome. I really enjoyed this challenge and the friendliness of the community. I’ve never received so many comments on one post – it’s wonderful! Have a great day!
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Yes, that’s one of the great things about YeahWrite. I’ve only been participating the last month or so but it seems like camaraderie encourages folks to comment and vote. Glad you’re here.
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Aw, you’re so sweet, Meg, and if everyone’s like you, I have a feeling I’ll be here for a long time to come! Thanks so much!
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Interesting take- making the narrator the asker rather than the askee.
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Thanks so much for your comment and thanks for stopping by; I appreciate it. Have a great day!
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Im glad you added a ‘please’ in the last sentence. Gave it an essence! I loved your take on the prompt 🙂
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Thank you so much for your kind words, and I appreciate you stopping by. Have a wonderful day!
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I’m impressed! You’ve managed the almost imsobpisle.
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I’m sorry what does imsobpisle mean exactly?
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such a vulnerable piece. Nicely drawn, blainecindy.
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Thank you so much and thanks for stopping by. Have a lovely day!
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Ugh, one of the worst places to be in. You captured it so well, the sadness, the confusion, the question.
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Thanks so much for your kind words; I truly do appreciate it. And thanks for stopping by. I hope your day is awesome!
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I think this is something to which we can all relate. Well done!
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Thank you so much! And thanks for stopping by. Have a great day.
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Tragic when you have to yearn for the one you love. This touched me.
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I’m so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by! Have a great day.
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Very sad, and so familiar. You capture it perfectly.
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How very nice of you to say so. Thanks so much for stopping by. Have a great day!
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Such an emotional piece. You did a great job with your words!
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Thanks so much for your kind words; I appreciate it. And thanks for stopping by. Have a great day!
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It takes so much bravery to ask for that sign. I used to pray for it all the time.
very nice take on the prompt.
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You are so right about needing to have enough courage for this. What a thoughtful response. Thanks for stopping by; I so appreciate it. Have a great day!
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Lovely poem from a hear-broken soul. I guess, she already knows the answer..
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful words. I appreciate it so much and thanks for stopping by. Have a great day!
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Honestly, I have been in this situation. You want to know, but are so afraid to just ask for fear of the death knell on the relationship which was inevitable anyways. Brilliant take!
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Thank you so much for your kind words. I do appreciate it and thanks so much for stopping by. Have a great day!
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what vow did he break? very solemn post. nice.
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What vow did he break? You decide. And thank you so much for stopping by and commenting. I do appreciate it. Have a great day!
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Aww, this is really sad. Very beautifully written, you capture the melancholy of not knowing really well.
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Thank you so much for your kind words. And I appreciate your stopping by and commenting. Have a great day!
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